- "smaller" should be two syllables (several times), also
"mily"
- ": 1215 2 3 I~ " tildes stand for repeated vowels (or diphthongs), so they should never stand with the vowel itself
- ": 1006 2 -2 I′m " use of accent instead of apostrophe (several times)
- several capitalized words mid-sentence ("Family", "Girl", ...)
