Small edit, halved BPM, amended timing to suit, spotted a couple of off pitches, changed a few notes to rap. The singer's voice is a nightmare to pitch.
Overhauled song, split some words that are sung over two pitches, loads of small timing improvements, quite a few pitch changes, sorted out a load of tilde symbols into the right place.
I really wish I knew what I know now when I'd started doing this