I think that's just my inexperieince and lack of any real musical background or understanding. Your corrections are very helpful and I appreciate you taking the time to help me improve.
Timing seems pretty good, I just asked because I noticed several unusual/strange syllabifications. I fixed them already, so if you download the txt from here and compare to your local version, you should be able to compare.
I manually edit the lyrics then tap in Karedi and tweak further in Melody Mania's song editor. This is my first track so I'm still trying to get the hang of percieved timing vs matching the actual waveform... I know it probably needs a lot of improvement but I figured something is better than nothing.. Please let me know how to improve.
