Nice song. I will fix it, but it's lot of work. All words are not broken in syliables, Tuning ist off and 90% of pitches also wrong. bohning is right when he gives a one Star rating.
Because we must not rate how much we like the song, but how well it is created in terms of singability (if that's even a word, you know what I mean). And if someone doesn't even bother splitting words into syllables (which is the base for all subsequent finetuning steps), it's a 1-star rating from me (and I am not talking about a few forgotten/overlooked syllabifications here).
Thanks for this, it's a great song.
I'm not sure why someone gave a 2-star rating. Sure it needs a few words broken into syllables, but overall it's pretty good.
bohning is right when he gives a one Star rating.