Hello gun8, the song is really nice! I like it. Here are some ideas for creating. The scores should be spaced slightly. Then it could be sung better and looks better too. This can be achieved by shortening the notes. Then the syllables are precise and not as a total mass. If you know what I mean?
And please adjust the text at:: 4000 4 -3 you’ll -> then
- 4006
: 4008 4 6 You’ll -> we’ll
Sorry for my bad English
Thanks for creating the Text.