Congrats for your first song and thanks for contributing to the community. My quick remarks:
- first note should start at 0 (adjust GAP accordingly, either manually or use UltraStar Manager to automatically fix it)
- syllables should not be separated by hyphens (" - ") - you can fix this by search and replace in any decent text editor
- BPM is rather low, I"d suggest doubling it to 250 (either manually in the UltraStar editor or with UltraStar Manager)
- It is common practice to capitalize the first word of each line ("C" in UltraStar deluxe CMD editor or use UltraStar Manager)
- Line break timings should be corrected ("T" in UltraStar deluxe CMD editor or use UltraStar Manager)
- My suggestion is to divide a double consonant, so rather "pas-sion" instead of "pa-ssion"
- Tildes (~) should be used right after the vowel that is repeated
- Please add #LANGUAGE, #GENRE, #YEAR, #CREATOR
Don’t hesitate to ask in case you have questions
