Actually no
I listened to it again, now I think all is fine except for the second "blow a" s - I changed the pitch to 10 for them instead of 14 - but I don"t know if one can hear a pitch at all there
I also added the oh"s at the end of the song
QuantenspringerXXX, have you run it through Yass or some other software using the "instrument function"? The phrase you"re mentioning sounds spot on to me.
Cheers!
