Hi Danmcfoo and admins. I've submitted an edit for this. This isn't playable as the pitches are almost all four notes too high. I've only fixed the pitches, the song needs some other work, some of the timing is a bit off and some words need splitting over two pitches. Saying that, with the pitches shifted, it is very playable.
Hi Danmcfoo . Had a sing of this eariler, almost the whole song is pitched 4 notes too high. The 1st word "Swing" you have at A3. I shifted every word down four notes, so "swing" is F3 etc. Doing that fixed 90% of the pitches, and there are few others I changed manually. I've not messed with the timing at all, I'll submit my version as an edit if you want a look at it. I could barely hit a note as-is, shift them all down 4 notes, very playable.