Here's some feedback:
- song should start at beat 0 (it currently starts at -14). You can either avoid that during creation by adjusting GAP instead of shifting notes into negative values. You can fix it via USDX editor (T), UltraStar Manager, YASS or Karedi.
- #BPM is in a good range (200-400), but should most likely be rounded to an integer
- #LANGUAGE and #YEAR should be set, #GENRE would also be nice (I've set them now)
- Audio sample was wrong, you need to open developer tools (F12) and start playing the sample, then retrieve the actual sample URL
- it would be nice if you add syncer metatags
- syllabification is improvable (try to split words into syllables as close to what is actually sung, use ~ to repeat vowels)
E.g.
: -14 2 -5 I'
: -12 2 -8 ve
should be
: -14 2 -5 I
: -12 2 -8 ~'ve
: 99 3 -7 lo
: 103 11 -5 st
should be
: 99 3 -7 lo
: 103 11 -5 ~st
: 125 6 -9 sigh
: 132 4 -6 ts
should be
: 125 6 -9 si
: 132 4 -6 ~ghts
This is my first song. I've tried my best, following the instructions provided by Daniel-Steinbock (Thanks!!). There were a couple of pitches, which I was not entirely sure of. Feedback is appreciated.
